Crush...Yiff...Destroy!

RailFoxen · Vociferator Joined: 01 Jan 2005 Posts: 625

Awesome piece on Posty. Every time I try to read his journal I lose time and wake up hours later in the backyard half-naked and surrounded by empty 40s of Stoli. It's fun like 'Required Humanities' crossed with 'Ross Perot'. You've gone where I couldn't be bothered to go.

You might consider noting where you're quoting PBX's recruiting poster and where you're making 'snarky' comments about it ('snarky' is a word PBXers use when they're criticizing other PBXers; they'll be hitting up thesaurus.com for you, though). Y'know, italics or some shit:

The New Meat has surely reached some apex rarely seen but by those who dare to climb to these soaring, dizzying heights of critical review and soul-piercing inward-directed thought. This article both expunges and extolls the absurd excesses and nuances of the intellectual-political movement, and in doing so may set the author upon the supposed golden path towards earning the acclaim and exaltification of the hordes.

Jerry Collins · Vociferator Joined: 16 Jul 2003 Posts: 548

There's a lesson in this ....but what the hell it is,well, it's anyone's guess :shock:

Paul · Needs to get out more Joined: 01 Feb 2004 Posts: 1092

The New Meat, that's a really vicious article you've written on PostVixen.

Good job! :D

Slight problem, tho': Due to the lack of quote formatting, it's hard to tell what's quotes and what's your comments in that very long "...psychedelic ...transpecies ...political" etc. section. Would be nice and reader-friendly to add the proper HTML codes there (and you don't want anyone to think PostVixen's babblings are yours, do you now?).

The New Meat · Needs to get out more Joined: 03 Jun 2003 Posts: 933

My bad. I'll have to ask Mitch what I need to do about that.

weird_guy_in_the_corner · Vociferator Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Posts: 708

This really sucks: FurNation is still down so I can't get to the website I wanted to post an article on. Meanwhile, New Meat continues to pump 'em out like a soccer mom.

The New Meat · Needs to get out more Joined: 03 Jun 2003 Posts: 933

This really sucks: FurNation is still down so I can't get to the website I wanted to post an article on. Meanwhile, New Meat continues to pump 'em out like a soccer mom.

I meant to say this earlier, but couldn't since I was overseas and computer access was sketchy: Nice job on your articles so far. The "Slop" one ended a bit abruptly, but who am I to talk? We're not doing high literary criticism here, and any article that makes me laugh I consider successful. And yours did just that - especially renaming Tony Earl. A nice touch, that. Anyway, you're off to a good start. I expect you'll be developing your own voice more the more you write, so hope to see more from you soon.

weird_guy_in_the_corner · Vociferator Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Posts: 708

This really sucks: FurNation is still down so I can't get to the website I wanted to post an article on. Meanwhile, New Meat continues to pump 'em out like a soccer mom.

I meant to say this earlier, but couldn't since I was overseas and computer access was sketchy: Nice job on your articles so far. The "Slop" one ended a bit abruptly, but who am I to talk? We're not doing high literary criticism here, and any article that makes me laugh I consider successful. And yours did just that - especially renaming Tony Earl. A nice touch, that. Anyway, you're off to a good start. I expect you'll be developing your own voice more the more you write, so hope to see more from you soon.

Thank you. :D